Monday, April 28, 2014

Blog 24


Melissa Vizzi

Professor Chandler

English 3029 section 1

4/28/14

Short Analysis Transcript- Making sure the person having the interview feels comfortable

Introduction

No matter what people may say to you, going into an interview will always be scary. Whether it is an interview with a friend, a movie star, and athlete, anything. The most important part of an interview is being able to have the interviewee know that you’re actually interested in what they’re saying. It’s especially important with the interviewer is able to understand where the interviewee may be coming from; it makes the interviewee feel more comfortable. The more comfortable the interviewee is, the more of an honest answer you’ll receive. The interviewee should feel confident and comfortable in their environment. A comfortable environment is extremely important. You don’t want your interviewee to feel uncomfortable to where they’re constantly moving around and losing distraction. These are all important fact and keys that an interviewer should review before going into an interview.

Literature Review

I DON’T CURRENTLY HAVE MY LITERATURE REVIEW. WHEN I WAS HOME FOR MY PROCEDURES I DID THE LITERATURE REVIEW ON MY MOTHER’S COMPUTER AND FORGOT TO EMAIL IT TO MYSELF. I WILL GET IT TO YOU ASAP!

 

 

 

Methods

For my research project I was searching to see if writing groups could be some form of therapy for a cancer patient. I used an audio recorder through a cell phone for this interview, which made it easier for me to be able to look back through out any point of the interview. For the remainder of this paper I will be referring to the interviewee participate as R or Robin. Robin was diagnosed with breast cancer back in 2007 and has been attending writing groups since 2012.

                This interview was performed in Robin’s home specifically in her living room. She sat on the love couch while I sat on a chair. For this interview I used a cell phone as well as a piece of paper and pen. I used to phone to be able to record the interview and the paper and pen to record what her reactions to the questions may be. For example, her facial expressions, movements in her hands, the mood of the room after a question was asked, etc. Our environment was very quiet which made it easier for both Robin and myself to focus on the interview. Robin was asked a total of 11 questions and the interview lasted about 8 minutes long. It was very short interview, but I believe Robin gave me her most honest answers. After the interview was over, we had a short little side conversation and then I left.

Data Analysis

In this transcript, the interviewer (M) talks to the interviewee (R) about cancer and how writing groups can be a form of therapy for the patient. Like stated previously, it’s important to make sure the interviewee feels comfortable to open up to the interviewer. A good way to do that is to tell your story a little bit, and as the interviewer to also answer the question. In question number two the interviewer (M) asked the interviewee (R) when she was diagnosed with cancer. After the interviewee (R) answered the question saying that she was 48, the interviewer (M) responded with “And I was diagnosed with cancer at almost half of your age” adding in a little laugh. This made the interviewee (R) for more comfortable and put a smile on her face. It made the interviewee (R) realize that she wasn’t the only one who was struggling with such an awful illness. You could tell that by the interviewee (R) finding out that the interviewer (R) also had cancer took a weight off her shoulders. The answers coming from the interviewee became less professional and more relaxed- and that’s exactly what (M) was looking for.

Not only is it important to make the interviewee feel comfortable, but it’s also important to ask questions straight forward and to not beat around the bush. A lot of people feel like they need to treat others differently because they have cancer. In fact, (R) stated how easy it was to talk (M) because she could understand where she was coming from and asked the questions in a “nice manner”. When (R) said those things (M) asked the question of “What kinds of treatment did you have to go through?” (R) stated that, “Normally people are curious as to why I have no hair and am so pale so they’re hesitant to ask me, but not you. You just go for it, and in such a nice manner too.”

Remaining eye contact with the person you’re interviewing throughout the entire interview is also a very important key to a successful interview. You as the interviewer, is showing the interviewee that you’re genuinely interested in what they’re saying and it’s also a form of respect. (M) made sure to remain eye contact with (R) the whole time. When the interviewee is seeing that you’re interested in what they’re saying, they’ll become more open with you and start to give you more heart- felt answers, especially if it’s already a touchy subject to begin with- they begin to open up. You could tell the interview took an interesting and touching turn when (R) started to explain how she coped with the fact that she had been diagnosed with cancer. It began with a long pause, and although she put her head down, (M) remained eye contact and allowed her to take the time she needed. She then repeated the question to herself and said, “I cried. I cried for hours. I remember getting home and just sitting on my couch crying and asking myself why? That’s when I picked up a notepad and pen sitting on the side table next to me. I remember just writing. Writing how I was feeling, trying to answer questions. It’s when I was done and sat back that I felt better. I discovered something beautiful, writing. It didn’t take the cancer away, but it sure did help the pain.”

                Hearing peoples struggles, makes the bad things in your life seem a little better. Performing interviews and hearing other people’s stories makes you appreciate the little things. We all have things to be thankful for, sometimes it’s hard finding those things, but they’re there. This interviewing was truly inspiring to (M) and made her see the different forms of ‘therapy’ people use to cope with them being diagnosed with cancer, writing being one of them. Writing opens a door for people, it’s an art where people can express their feelings and no one else has to see if they don’t want them to, it’s truly a great form of release.

Limitations

Limitations

                I believe that all research projects will have some form of limitations. The first limitation was the distance from my house to Hackensack. I am a very busy full time student, as I’m sure everyone is, and I didn’t have a lot of time to be driving back and forth. Unfortunately I was only able to interview one person. I wish I would have had a little more time where I could have interviewed more people and maybe even someone my own age. I feel like the most people I could have interviewed the more results I would have received which would have made my results more direct and accurate instead of them being based on one person.

I NEED TO WORK ON THIS SECTION. I DON’T KNOW WHY I HAVE SO MUCH DIFFICULTY. I NEED TO LOOK AT THE EXAMPLES YOU’VE PROVIDED FOR US ON THE BLOG SO I CAN FIGURE THIS OUT MORE!

Results

From my study I believe I received some very positive results. Throughout my interview my participant spoke nothing but highly of this writing group. I can tell by how passionately Robin spoke about this writing group that it truly changed her life. The first sign that Robin gave me where I could tell that writing was a positive form of healing was when I asked her how she coped with being diagnosed with cancer. In her answer she stated that, “I discovered something beautiful, writing. It didn’t take the cancer away but it sure did help the pain.” In this initial statement is where she admitted it all, “..it helps the pain” she says. Right here we can see that yes, writing isn’t going to cute your cancer, it’s not a form of treatment, it’s a form of therapy. It’s something that can and will help you as long as you work with it and go into these groups with a positive attitude.

                Another statement I found in my interview which gave me proof that writing groups are a positive form of therapy for Robin and could be for others is when she says, “these people have become my family.” This shows me that not only will you writing groups help you with sadness and anger and other emotions but it will help you create friends that become family. You need to realize that coming into these writing sessions that you’re not the only person who is struggling with cancer and may be nervous to share you work or to begin writing. Everyone is scared but you must overcome your fear and go into these sessions with an open mind. It’s the only way you will receive positive results.

                Based on the one interview I did with Robin I came to the conclusion that writing groups can be a positive form of therapy for cancer patients. Attending these writing sessions gives cancer patients a place to feel comfortable. You know walking in that everyone has cancer but everyone has their own battles and struggles but no one makes you feel like theirs are worse than yours. They encourage you to speak up and to try it before you put it down. You don’t have to share your wok if you don’t want to, but sometimes it could help you more to hear your own words and to see people’s reactions. I believe that writing groups are not only for cancer patients, they’re for anyone. Although you may enjoy writing alone, it’s good to experience new things and putting yourself out there and attending a writing group is a good way to do so.

Thursday, April 24, 2014

Blog 23

This is what I have so far:


Conclusion for English 3029

                As a whole, I think we can all agree that writing shows some kind of a therapeutic release; whether it be for cancer patients and someone who is just having a bad day. Through my research I myself felt writing to be a great way for me to get my feelings out. Being the interviewer and being on the opposite side, I wanted to see what it would be like to write about how I was feeling and I myself, felt some sort of release when I was finished. It was actually a beautiful experience. Your sadness and everything you feel could be wrong, vanishes. It’s miraculous and amazing.

Tuesday, April 22, 2014

Blog 22

I'm sure I'm not alone when I say that the introduction is probably the most difficult part of the paper. Although you're getting graded on the paper as a whole, it's the introduction that starts the entire mood. It's the part of the paper that will either draw the professor in or give them a bad perspective of what the remainder of what your paper may look like.

So, what I worked on in class was furthering an excellence to my introduction. I've been referring to a site called www.writingcenter.unc.edu and its been helping me on how to structure my introduction, maybe some of my other classmates can look at it for a guide. It explains what should be in your introduction and why that specific part is important to the introduction as a whole.

Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Blog 20

My focus for my paper is to try and find if writing groups could be used as a form of "therapy" for cancer patients.

I am going to start my paper with my introduction. Next I will move to my literature review. After my literature review is when I'll start talking about my interview with interviewee. Once I am done talking about the interview I would like to review my data that I gathered from the interview. I'll then talk about my results and what I found through my interview and will close the research project with a conclusion.

Thursday, April 10, 2014

Blog 18

Revised introduction:

No matter what people may say to you, going into an interview will always be scary. Whether it is an interview with a friend, a movie star, and athlete, anything. The most important part of an interview is being able to have the interviewee know that you’re actually interested in what they’re saying. It’s especially important with the interviewer is able to understand where the interviewee may be coming from; it makes the interviewee feel more comfortable. The more comfortable the interviewee is, the more of an honest answer you’ll receive. The interviewee should feel confident and comfortable in their environment. A comfortable environment is extremely important. You don’t want your interviewee to feel uncomfortable to where they’re constantly moving around and losing distraction. These are all important fact and keys that an interviewer should review before going into an interview.

Thursday, April 3, 2014

Blog 17

- How can you make your interviewee comfortable? How can you draw them in and make them focused?
A- relating yourself to them.

M- When were you diagnosed with cancer
R- Um let’s see. I was 45.
M- Ha, and I was diagnosed with cancer at almost half that age. What was your reaction to being diagnosed with cancer?
R- Oh, I hadn’t realized you also have cancer! Anyway, I was completely shocked and mortified. I didn’t know what the next step was. It was like I had a million questions to ask but couldn’t open my mouth. I was numb, I couldn’t move.

- Is it important to ask questions straight forward or to maybe beat around the bush?
A- When you're nervous, your interviewee will be nervous. You should start out your interview being confident and straight forward.

M- What kinds of treatment did you have to go through?
R- Thankfully, nothing too serious. Well, I don’t think it’s too serious. I went through chemotherapy for 6 months and then we decided to perform a mastectomy to get the cancer out soon and fast. Now it’s all gone and I just have to take one pill a day for five years. It’s funny because normally people are curious as to why I have no hair and am so pale so they’re hesitant to ask me, but not you. You just go for it, and in such a nice manner too

- Is it important to remain eye contact? What does that show the interviewee?
A- I believe it's very important to remain eye contact! It shows the person you're interviewing that you're genuinely interested in what they're saying.

M- How did you cope with being diagnosed with cancer?
R- I cried. I cried for hours. I remember getting home and just sitting on my couch crying and asking myself why? That’s when I picked up a notepad and pen sitting on the side table next to me. I remember just writing. Writing how I was feeling, trying to answer questions. It’s when I was done and sat back that I felt better. I discovered something beautiful, writing. It didn’t take the cancer away, but it sure did help the pain.

I'm using this quote as evidence because in the interview (R) put her head down at this point, but I never took my eyes off her. I wanted her to know that I really was interested in what she was saying. I mourned for her and I didn't want her to feel like I wasn't interested in what she was saying.

Blog 15


Short Analysis Transcript- Making sure the person having the interview feels comfortable

                The most important part of an interview is being able to have the interviewee know that you’re actually interested in what they’re saying. It’s especially important with the interviewer is able to understand where the interviewee may be coming from; it makes the interviewee feel more comfortable. The more comfortable the interviewee is, the more of an honest answer you’ll receive. The interviewee should feel confident and comfortable in their environment.

 In this transcript, the interviewer (M) talks to the interviewee (R) about cancer and how writing groups can be a form of therapy for the patient. Like stated previously, it’s important to make sure the interviewee feels comfortable to open up to the interviewer. A good way to do that is to tell your story a little bit, and as the interviewer to also answer the question. In question number two the interviewer (M) asked the interviewee (R) when she was diagnosed with cancer. After the interviewee (R) answered the question saying that she was 48, the interviewer (M) responded with “And I was diagnosed with cancer at almost half of your age” adding in a little laugh. This made the interviewee (R) for more comfortable and put a smile on her face. It made the interviewee (R) realize that she wasn’t the only one who was struggling with such an awful illness. You could tell that by the interviewee (R) finding out that the interviewer (R) also had cancer took a weight off her shoulders. The answers coming from the interviewee became less professional and more relaxed- and that’s exactly what (M) was looking for.

Not only is it important to make the interviewee feel comfortable, but it’s also important to ask questions straight forward and to not beat around the bush. A lot of people feel like they need to treat others differently because they have cancer. In fact, (R) stated how easy it was to talk (M) because she could understand where she was coming from and asked the questions in a “nice manner”. When (R) said those things (M) asked the question of “What kinds of treatment did you have to go through?” (R) stated that, “Normally people are curious as to why I have no hair and am so pale so they’re hesitant to ask me, but not you. You just go for it, and in such a nice manner too.”

Remaining eye contact with the person you’re interviewing throughout the entire interview is also a very important key to a successful interview. You as the interviewer, is showing the interviewee that you’re genuinely interested in what they’re saying and it’s also a form of respect. (M) made sure to remain eye contact with (R) the whole time. When the interviewee is seeing that you’re interested in what they’re saying, they’ll become more open with you and start to give you more heart- felt answers, especially if it’s already a touchy subject to begin with- they begin to open up. You could tell the interview took an interesting and touching turn when (R) started to explain how she coped with the fact that she had been diagnosed with cancer. It began with a long pause, and although she put her head down, (M) remained eye contact and allowed her to take the time she needed. She then repeated the question to herself and said, “I cried. I cried for hours. I remember getting home and just sitting on my couch crying and asking myself why? That’s when I picked up a notepad and pen sitting on the side table next to me. I remember just writing. Writing how I was feeling, trying to answer questions. It’s when I was done and sat back that I felt better. I discovered something beautiful, writing. It didn’t take the cancer away, but it sure did help the pain.”

                Hearing peoples struggles, makes the bad things in your life seem a little better. Performing interviews and hearing other people’s stories makes you appreciate the little things. We all have things to be thankful for, sometimes it’s hard finding those things, but they’re there. This interviewing was truly inspiring to (M) and made her see the different forms of ‘therapy’ people use to cope with them being diagnosed with cancer, writing being one of them. Writing opens a door for people, it’s an art where people can express their feelings and no one else has to see if they don’t want them to, it’s truly a great form of release.